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How do I help a mentee improve their professional profile online?

Most profiles read like a job description written by someone else. A short session can fix the three parts that do the work.

Read time
4 minutes
Module
Core skills
Session length
30 minutes
The short answer

What good looks like.

  • Start with the headline and opening lines. That is all most recruiters read before deciding to scroll.

  • Then check for evidence: numbers, outcomes and named tools rather than adjectives about being passionate and driven.

  • Finally check the words a recruiter would type. If the job title they want never appears, the profile will not surface in a search.

In practice

A sequence you can follow.

  1. 01

    Read the top third aloud

    If it says nothing specific, rewrite it together.

  2. 02

    Add three pieces of evidence

    One number, one outcome, one tool or method.

  3. 03

    Match the language to the target job

    Use the words in real adverts, not internal job titles.

  4. 04

    Pick one thing to publish

    A project write-up or a short post beats a perfect profile nobody sees.

Common mistakes

What to avoid.

  • Rewriting the whole profile for them during the call

  • Optimising for your industry’s jargon rather than theirs

  • Focusing on the photo before the words

  • Encouraging constant posting when they only need to be findable

Extra tips

Small things that make the half hour better.

Fix the top third

That is all most recruiters read.

Three pieces of evidence

One number, one outcome, one tool.

Use advert language

If the target title never appears, search will not find them.

Do not rewrite it for them

Coach the edits; let them type.

Take this guide with you.

Download a printable version of this guide: the short answer, the steps, the extra tips, the mistakes to avoid and the questions mentors ask, to read before your next session.

Questions

The things people ask first.

Which platform should they use?

Whichever one hiring managers in their field actually use. It is not the same everywhere.

Do they need to post content?

No. Being findable and credible matters more than being prolific.

Next: Mentoring someone after a rejection.

Separating the decision from the person, then getting back to work.